Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Quikrap





8 comments:

kylekelley said...

The perspective on t he first trailer seems a bit off and for some reason I'd like to see some space between the house and the columns on the second

I def like them with less clutter now though.

Justin McCormick said...

I think it needs even less clutter..

The points of focus are;
1) crappy trailer
2) lavishly over done concrete.

everything else takes away from that and "muddle" the picture,make it hard to see the contrast clearly enough to catch the concepts relation to the product.

its a difficult one to PS, but try and reduce everything but those two elements and see what happens

mitortilla said...

Thanks guys, I just can't find the right pics. aargh!

mitortilla said...

I don't like the tagline, the quick muddles the already muddled image.

bang!bang! said...

In the first ad, get rid of the stack. Its only a cooling tower, so its not really smoke, but steam. Its just one of those things that bug ya if you really know what it is.
But for some helpful crit. I'm agreeing with the others and saying its just to cluttered. Need to step back and look at what really needs to be there and do away with the rest

Justin McCormick said...

BTW: a little something i found...do an image search in Deviant Art stock images. Its a treasure trove of FREE images.

Justin McCormick said...

I like the middle one...there is no water in it! hahahaha

mitortilla said...

it does need water hahaha. how do you do water?