Monday, October 6, 2008

Any Thoughts?





the full three...

10 comments:

mitortilla said...

i like it, heebee jeebees.

mitortilla said...

yeah what a difference, i think you can still find a better wallpaper. kitschier, kitchener.

kylekelley said...

I know the point is for her to be enjoying the milk, but maybe think about her facial expression, should she look in pain, or slightly agitated

just something to think about

mitortilla said...

blue and yellow are awesome colors for your campaign, the green on top is a bit too dark and gloomy.

Justin McCormick said...

yeah..the green one I just did for fun...its not part of the campaign.

mitortilla said...

hahahaha, wow man you rocked it!!!

upfreak said...

i kinda wish you'd found three different people to photograph. Although it's a small quibble at this point.

Also, your line is clunky. It should be more conversational: "There's an easier way to enjoy the taste of milk."

upfreak said...

by the way, you need to work with your line and the logo. what's their relationship? right now they aren't working together well at all. and the logo is awfully low on the page. ever hear of a "live area?" I may be wrong, but it looks like you're outside of it now.

mitortilla said...

yeah the tagline is too big, maybe it's look good on top center since there's a lot of negative space there, the logo needs to be a bit bigger, maybe in the center-bottom. or right is fine, but on the blue background it gets lost on the other two it looks perty. But on the blue one the center area is whiter so i think it'll be most noticeable.

Justin McCormick said...

Thanks! Yeah, I seem to struggle with the line and logo...but I will most certainly try some of the suggestions mentioned.