Friday, April 3, 2009

thus far

what do you guys not like about these. Be honest please!



7 comments:

mitortilla said...

I think you either have to have three ads with bikini girls or three ads with the car wash somewhere, looks like two diff ideas.

mitortilla said...

I correct myself, three different things or three of the same.

Justin McCormick said...

very good point, Thanks!

Justin McCormick said...

yes the hang up is the golf course one. At this point I am leaning towards trashing that one and coming up with a third execution different from the rest.

kylekelley said...

They look great, but I think if I didn't already know what you were trying to say I would have a hard time figuring out the central idea. I like the driveway one AND I really like the desert, but they just don't connect to me.


I DO wish I could learn how to make my shit lOOK this good though..

mitortilla said...

yeah I would go for the machine car wash on three different but exciting situations.

upfreak said...

The only one I like is the bikini car wash one. That says "portable car wash" to me. The driveway doesn't, and the golf course certainly doesn't.

Also, the bikini girls are the only charming / interesting "car wash" visual you have.


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